2 thoughts on “Something for class

  1. Good facial on the “Doesn’t make me gay, (pause) I think.”

    I have to ask, is the exsesive deep breathing part of it?

    Could be funny if you ended it with, “I want you to be my wife.. or you can be the husband, and I can be the wife. It’s really up to you.”

    Or somthing.. just needed a ending.

    Keep it up!

  2. GiB:

    Thanks for the feedback.

    I didn’t write it so I can’t vouch for the ending or really add to it but I see what you’re saying. I’ll play with making the ending stronger.

    And I probably wasn’t breathing properly.

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